not heaven nor hell so...
Wow, that was a wonderful poem.
I agree with Jeremy, writing is your gift in life, and you shouldn't let that o to waste. There are so little poets out there that can REALLY get to the heart of the reader. I think that you are certainly one of those rare people.
You should never give up hope that you will finally see those loved ones again.
I think it's all that any of us can hold onto.
It's so important that you believe in something, and I see in your poem that you believe in a lot of things, you believe in 'love surviving death into eternity' as the song goes. And it is very true. I think that we all need to believe this isn't the end. There is a life after death and we haven't truely lost our loved ones forever we will see them again even if it takes a while.
You are very talented and I would like to say that there aren't enough people out there like you.
People that have a heart that can hold on and not let go. A heart that will remember all those good times even thought your time with them may be over for the time being.
It is very important that people like you give others inspiration.
Keep it up - you're doing a great job!!!!!