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Kyle aka Huck Member
since 2000-07-16
Posts 63Linn, MO USA |
Even though you're gone, You're family is staying strong. Your life came to an end at the sound of the gong, Your car slammed into a tree, The rock you didnt see. Airborne is how they say, It all happend led my life astray. There's a new edition to your home, We put up a memorial stone. Without you here it's an abyss, Why did it happen like this? That's the New Edition to our lives, Not having you here..... |
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Phoebee Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 42Peoria, AZ |
Geeezz.....who died? I feel so bad for you. You have a great way of expressing your feelings using words, though. You have a gift! "Everything happens for a reason!" |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Hey there, sorry to hear about your friend. Just keep your head up. It will get better if you let it, if you don't it will just get harder. If you ever need to talk email me. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Kittie Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 103 |
Wow, this is really a great poem, and I hope things work out.. I really like the ending about the new edition to your life, people come and go and... it seems only the good die young most of the time. Good luck with everything Kittie |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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