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Kyle aka Huck
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since 07-16-2000
Posts 63
Linn, MO USA


0 posted 07-18-2000 07:24 PM       View Profile for Kyle aka Huck   Email Kyle aka Huck   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Kyle aka Huck's Home Page   View IP for Kyle aka Huck

Even though you're gone,
You're family is staying strong.
Your life came to an end at the sound of the gong,
Your car slammed into a tree,
The rock you didnt see.
Airborne is how they say,
It all happend led my life astray.
There's a new edition to your home,
We put up a memorial stone.
Without you here it's an abyss,
Why did it happen like this?
That's the New Edition to our lives,
Not having you here.....

© Copyright 2000 Kyle Finn - All Rights Reserved
Phoebee
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since 07-09-2000
Posts 42
Peoria, AZ


1 posted 07-19-2000 12:36 AM       View Profile for Phoebee   Email Phoebee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Phoebee

Geeezz.....who died?  I feel so bad for you.  You have a great way of expressing your feelings using words, though.  You have a gift!

"Everything happens for a reason!"
Chel
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since 07-01-2000
Posts 516
Baltimore, MD, USA


2 posted 07-19-2000 07:21 PM       View Profile for Chel   Email Chel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chel

Hey there, sorry to hear about your friend.  Just keep your head up.  It will get better if you let it, if you don't it will just get harder.  If you ever need to talk email me.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"
Kittie
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since 07-08-2000
Posts 103


3 posted 07-19-2000 08:14 PM       View Profile for Kittie   Email Kittie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kittie

Wow, this is really a great poem, and I hope things work out.. I really like the ending about the new edition to your life, people come and go and... it seems only the good die young most of the time.  Good luck with everything
Kittie


Artic Wind
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since 09-16-2007
Posts 8075
Realm of Supernatural


4 posted 12-02-2007 03:50 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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