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No Hope

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Phoebee
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since 07-09-2000
Posts 42
Peoria, AZ


0 posted 07-18-2000 04:52 PM       View Profile for Phoebee   Email Phoebee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Phoebee

Down a dark hallway
I wander
With no hope of turning back to the light
Where I came from
So pure and innocent
I was.
Now I walk in the heart of darkness
Searching for my place in life.
I beg and plead
Accept me for who I am
Reject me for who I will never be.
Look into these blue eyes
Tell me what you see.
Do you see a girl with no hope,
No dreams,
No aspiration to be the best she can be?
Is there hope for me,
In this big, cruel world?
Do I dare to believe
That I can be set free?
Do I dare to achieve
The goals set by me?
Down a dark hallway
I wander
With no hope of turning back to the light...


"Everything happens for a reason!"
© Copyright 2000 Ashley Alyssa Larson - All Rights Reserved
Rachel Turner
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since 07-15-2000
Posts 16
Judsonia, Arkansas


1 posted 07-18-2000 05:58 PM       View Profile for Rachel Turner   Email Rachel Turner   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rachel Turner

Good poem! Very good written! Keep it up!!

love,
Rachel
TrueLUV
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since 07-19-2000
Posts 163
Connecticut, U.S.A.


2 posted 07-19-2000 12:53 AM       View Profile for TrueLUV   Email TrueLUV   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TrueLUV

hey nice poem just kep on smiling you'll find the right path , but can you edit the reply to distrust iam a guy...   hope to read more of your stuff
Jeremy Halstead
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since 06-01-2000
Posts 572
Morris, Ill. U.S.A


3 posted 07-19-2000 06:18 AM       View Profile for Jeremy Halstead   Email Jeremy Halstead   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeremy Halstead

Bravo!!!! Bravo!!!!  You have truly caught the essence of hopelessness here.  The questions, the detail, and the perfect anologies were great....you really pulled the idea off wonderfully....excellent job!!

Jeremy

"Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade."
TrueLUV
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since 07-19-2000
Posts 163
Connecticut, U.S.A.


4 posted 07-19-2000 04:20 PM       View Profile for TrueLUV   Email TrueLUV   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TrueLUV

Hey man I appreciate the edit hope you write more good stuff nad hopefuly you will read more of mine :P
Phoebee
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since 07-09-2000
Posts 42
Peoria, AZ


5 posted 07-20-2000 12:04 AM       View Profile for Phoebee   Email Phoebee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Phoebee

Thanks!!  Hey TrueLUV......I look forward to reading more of yours!

"Everything happens for a reason!"
Alex Sankowich
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since 07-17-2000
Posts 28
North Carolina, USA


6 posted 07-20-2000 12:51 AM       View Profile for Alex Sankowich   Email Alex Sankowich   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Alex Sankowich's Home Page   View IP for Alex Sankowich

This too shall pass....for where there's hope, there is a light.


--
"True love lasts forever."
"Heroes will get remembered, but legends will never die."

HerMelness
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since 07-12-2000
Posts 37
Bridgewater, NS, Canada


7 posted 07-20-2000 09:30 AM       View Profile for HerMelness   Email HerMelness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HerMelness's Home Page   View IP for HerMelness

I really love this poem... your use of words is excellent.. the expression is great.. I think we've all questioned our value at one time or another.. you captured it! =)

~Mel~


-Wherever you go, go with all your heart.-
AngelShell
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since 03-01-2000
Posts 526
not heaven nor hell so...


8 posted 07-21-2000 04:41 AM       View Profile for AngelShell   Email AngelShell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AngelShell

Hope is very important in the world we live in today, but I msut admit that sometimes, hope isn't easy to find.
However that light will always find us again.  And it will always carry us out.

Keep up the great writing.

Love Always,
Shell.
Euclid the Kid
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since 07-15-2000
Posts 51
Eugene,Oregon


9 posted 07-21-2000 07:02 AM       View Profile for Euclid the Kid   Email Euclid the Kid   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Euclid the Kid

Some times life seems so hopeless- especially when you are trying to do the right thing for you- and others are kicking you down-- but don't give up Phoebe--"to thine own self be true..."  
             the Kid

I seek to be me-
and all I can be!
Vball Chickie1624
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since 05-14-2000
Posts 119
New York


10 posted 07-21-2000 08:04 AM       View Profile for Vball Chickie1624   Email Vball Chickie1624   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Vball Chickie1624's Home Page   View IP for Vball Chickie1624

Hey.  This is a great poem.  The message is very good.  Keep up hope....everything will work out!  Keep writing and have fun!

Love ya
Danielle  

"Dream what you want to dream; go where you want to go; be what you want to be, because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you
BabyGirl1
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since 07-02-2000
Posts 91
Morris, IL


11 posted 07-21-2000 11:36 PM       View Profile for BabyGirl1   Email BabyGirl1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BabyGirl1

This was a wonderful poem.  There will always be a light on at the end of the hallway.  Sometimes we just have a very long hallway to walk through to get there.   Keep up the great writing.  

"We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can fly only by embracing each other."

-Luciano de Crescenzo-
sherm
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since 07-21-2000
Posts 94
Evansville,IN


12 posted 07-22-2000 03:13 AM       View Profile for sherm   Email sherm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sherm

Good poem.  I know just how you feel. I feel like no one is like me and sometimes it bothers me but just remember that it can be cool too.
StarPryncess17
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since 05-31-2000
Posts 944
Colorado


13 posted 07-22-2000 07:00 PM       View Profile for StarPryncess17   Email StarPryncess17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit StarPryncess17's Home Page   View IP for StarPryncess17

Someone once told me "hope is what makes us sad" this is true, but at the times when you are most sad, the only thing that gets you through it all is hope. So keep your head up and don't lose hope for he who loses hope loses all. Love Always~*~Jessica~*~



*~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~*
Artic Wind
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since 09-16-2007
Posts 8075
Realm of Supernatural


14 posted 12-02-2007 08:29 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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