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Alex Sankowich
Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 28
North Carolina, USA

0 posted 2000-07-18 04:07 PM


I LOVE love poems, too, LoveBug, everyone.  That's why I write them.  They in my opinion are the most powerful, or either ones about hate.  But I have no hate in my heart so I don't have a reason to write any...unless if they are about hate or against it, and not about feelings of hate.  But umm...here's a poem I'm writing as of now...it may not be as good as my other ones, but these are feelings.

"Miracles"

It's never too hard to find the words
Of how much I love you
When I smile my feelings show
You're a miracle, baby, just so you'll know
Some people may think I'm a fool
For loving you too much
Some people say it's against the rules
But miracles are rules in themselves
And breaking your heart would be breaking a rule
Therefore, baby, you're a miracle
And I will not break your heart
Some rules aren't meant to be broken
And this is one of them
Miracles are heaven
And so are you
But of all the miracles I know
The best one is you saying "I love you"
You are the one miracle that shows
And when you say "I love you"
Everybody knows
Most times, you are so awesome
And I do not know what to do
But my miracle, Bristol, baby, I'm closing now
And I want you to know
I love you too


--
True love lasts forever.

Heroes get remembered, but legends never die.


© Copyright 2000 Alex Sankowich - All Rights Reserved
Chel
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
1 posted 2000-07-18 04:43 PM


Hey there, I liked this poem too.  Keep up the good work.

Chel


"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

Phoebee
Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 42
Peoria, AZ
2 posted 2000-07-18 04:44 PM


I love the poem.  You express your feelings like no other.  Keep up the good work.

"Everything happens for a reason!"

Snickers
Member
since 2000-05-25
Posts 88
East Haddam, CT
3 posted 2000-07-18 04:49 PM


I really like this.  You express yourself quite well.

~<3 Alwayz~
  **Nikki**


~*~*~*~*"We can complain because roses have thorns, or we can rejoice because thorns have roses." *~*~*~*~

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2007-12-02 12:56 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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