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sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be

0 posted 2000-07-18 01:13 PM


I am back,
And happy to be
I hope ya'll
Will welcome me!

Been gone a while,
Out of your sight.
Now that I'm back,
I'm eager to write!



how's that for a comeback?!

stay cool  

Lavada


"For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin



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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665
Twilight Zone
1 posted 2000-07-18 01:15 PM


Can't wait to read your poems
Rachel Turner
Junior Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 16
Judsonia, Arkansas
2 posted 2000-07-18 06:09 PM


Very good poem and comeback!!! Hope to hear more from ya!

            with love,
               Rachel

**AANGELLE**
Junior Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 45

3 posted 2000-07-18 06:47 PM


Mad poem!!  Hi welcome back!! Where've ya been? C-ya...  angel  
TrueLUV
Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158
Connecticut, U.S.A.
4 posted 2000-07-19 12:17 PM


That night I saw your tears of pain
I felt your heart and soul drowning with anguish
And from a distance I looked into your eyes although you turned away
I felt that I could be the one who turns your night to day
And at a later date we finally met as one
I lost myself in your blue eyes
I felt your body slip
I felt the passion of your pride and the aggression of your soul

TrueLUV
Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158
Connecticut, U.S.A.
5 posted 2000-07-19 12:19 PM


This response was removed because it was not a response, but a re-post of another poem.

[This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 07-19-2000).]

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A
6 posted 2000-07-19 06:32 AM


You graced this land
so long ago.
You've now returned
to us to show
the crafts you made
with your pen
than you shall make
once again.
Although I've never
seen you here,
I give no reason
for you to fear.
With the words
from in my heart,
"Welcome back"
from far apart..........end of stupid little peom...hehehe

I've been in here for a couple of months now and I've never seen ya in here...you'll have to catch up on ALL my stuff!!!!...j/k.  Welcome back.

Jeremy


"Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade."

Jacman
Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291
Dwight Il, US
7 posted 2000-07-19 09:37 AM


Hey, I didn't even know that you left.  Haha, thats because I've never seen you in here before.  Well anyway great comeback, and I'll be watching for you now.

jason

LyricFetish
Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528
North Carolina
8 posted 2000-07-19 11:08 AM


Hey chick, I remember you! Long time no write. Always welcome though, no matter how long you've strayed. Cool comeback poem, babe. Peace out, don't make yourself so scarce.

*~Meredith~*

It's so obvious
That the promise
Keeps me here
Painting pictures where
All the colors
Disappear
*Lit

Tamma
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Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV
9 posted 2000-07-19 03:47 PM


Welcome back Vada!!! Anyways...where ya been?ive missed ya!  

(if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- Poetic Bliss 82)


*A poets mind never rests, It is always dreaming*

sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
10 posted 2000-08-07 12:22 PM


Oh, ya'll know the story...

Spending time with my boyfriend...getting married, cleaning house, etc...blah, blah, blah...on and on...enough about me..how have ya'll been?????

stay cool  

Lavada

"For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin



Salooma
Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781

11 posted 2000-08-07 12:26 PM


Welcome back...nice to see a familar face around! I was gone for a while too, but back as well. So nice to see ya and hope to see more of your great poetry around!

Salooma

sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
12 posted 2000-08-07 12:43 PM


Hey Salooma! How've you been girl?! I missed being here..away from my poetic family...it's like not returning home for a couple months! I MISSED YOU ALL!!!!! GLAD TO BE BACK!!!!  

stay cool  

Lavada Miller

"For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin



chic
Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245
yellville, Ar, U.S.
13 posted 2000-10-02 12:11 PM


I was gone too
lost in the world.
Noone ever knew
what was with this girl.

But here I am
back to be seen.
Here to write poems
in the poetry scene.

A strange feeling
an urge I know not.
I want to write
So what the heck...WHY NOT??


Welcome back Mrs. Miller.  great poem to.  
(Though I think mine is better )LMAO

"Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me!

Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
14 posted 2000-10-02 12:41 PM


SCG~
Well this cant really be a welcome back post...Cuz you have been back for a while now...Anyways I liked it...It was really creative to write a poem on coming back...Keep up the good work!!!


It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe.

Lakewalker
Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
15 posted 2000-10-02 02:41 PM


Well I never even knew you were gone because I joined after you got back!   Well, anyway, nice way to return
cutie2005
Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148
Bennett, Colorado USA
16 posted 2000-10-02 06:02 PM


Welcome Back!!! Hope to here more poems from ya.. just that one was great!!  

If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them!

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