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Alex Sankowich
Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 28
North Carolina, USA

0 posted 2000-07-17 01:54 PM


Okie doke...this may not be as great as my first poem...but I wrote this one a whiiiiiile back.  I mention one of my friends, Chris, in here.  He said my g/f was worth 2 cents one day...but oh well.  Also, there is one part in there that's from a song...you'll know what it is.

"Loving You"

From the bottom of my heart
My love for you will not part
Being with you is the greatest
Loving you is the greatest
It's been that way from the start

True love is eternal
Being with you will never get old
Loving you will never die
From where we are right now
We can go really high

It's not some infatuation
Just look at the situation
We are love personified
Just look at us
Loving you is something I can not hide

The first time I saw you
I saw love
The first time you touched me
I felt love

Every moment I'm with you
Every chance I get  to be with you
Everything you influence me to do
There is nothing wrong with loving you

Loving you is something money can't buy
Not even that 2 cents
And even Chris wonders why
But you are the greatest thing to happen to me
And that's how it's gonna be

To let you know I love you
Is the greatest thing I can say
But saying it is different
Because when I show it
It truly pays

Every movement, every kiss, every sniff
Sometimes I wonder "if"
Every time, I wonder why
Why am I with you?
Because we were meant to be
And loving you
Is something you can and will see
And that's how it's gonna be



To love is to live: for without love, life is not life at all,
no, a life without love is a mere existence. The divine
beauty of life is not a thin

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Alex Sankowich
Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 28
North Carolina, USA
1 posted 2000-07-17 01:56 PM


My sig is messed up...oops.  Here's what it's supposed to say:

"To love is to live: for without love, life is not life at all, no, a life without love is a mere existence.  The divine beauty of life is not a thing to be held to one's self; it is to be shared; with a friend, with one whom you love.  For those who have love, life is truly beautiful.  Of love one thing can be sure; it is the essence of life."


Chel
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
2 posted 2000-07-17 02:00 PM


Once again, you have stunned me with your work.  I am sitting here wondering if this person truly knows how you feel.  Well I know the feeling, so keep up the good work.

Chel


"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2007-12-01 11:21 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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