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Chel
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since 2000-07-01
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Baltimore, MD, USA

0 posted 2000-07-17 09:20 AM


I have waited for this all my life
Its odd that I have it now
What is there to be done?
I want this to be forever
You only get one chance
You have swept me off my feet
I miss you
To have this forever is to be loved and love back
So when I saw forever
I mean with you

This poem doesn't have any special meaning.  I just wrote it.  I hope you all like it and get the gist of it.  Thanx for the support.  Luv always, Chel


"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

© Copyright 2000 Michelle Y. Plocinik - All Rights Reserved
Kyle aka Huck
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since 2000-07-16
Posts 63
Linn, MO USA
1 posted 2000-07-17 11:50 AM


nice poem, if theres someone youre thinkin about go for it unless hes taken if not its still a nice poem

LoveBug
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2 posted 2000-07-17 12:16 PM


This is a wonderful poem. I hope that everything works out for you. Keep up the good work!  

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea

Kittie
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since 2000-07-08
Posts 103

3 posted 2000-07-17 01:12 PM


This is a great poem Chel, keep up the great work.
Kittie



Alex Sankowich
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since 2000-07-17
Posts 28
North Carolina, USA
4 posted 2000-07-17 02:38 PM


Heh, you inspired me, Chel.  I'm gonna write a poem about forever.  Thanks!  And yeah, credit goes to you :P.
Jeremy Halstead
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since 2000-06-01
Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A
5 posted 2000-07-18 07:04 AM


I never say forever...it's a horrible jinx on me....It's a wonderful thought though.  Amore...what a wonderful thing..the greatest high in the world...excellent piece.

Jeremy

"Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade."

Jose Marti
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 374
washing DC
6 posted 2000-07-18 12:29 PM


wow chel, very nice poem.  I'm surprised it doesn't have any special significance to you. I enjoyed it a lot. I wish it did have special significance.

TAP2
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since 2000-06-29
Posts 211
Morris, Il USA
7 posted 2000-07-18 12:55 PM


Chel,
Loved it as alwayz. Forever is a beautiful thing, only the lucky ones find it. I thank God that I have been lucky enough.

Thomas A. Plemmons

"I could have missed the pain
But I'd of had to miss The Dance"

-Garth Brooks-

Rachel Turner
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since 2000-07-15
Posts 16
Judsonia, Arkansas
8 posted 2000-07-18 06:04 PM


Chel,
Great poem!! I liked it alot! and by the way thanks for the support you have given me!!!

          with love,
              Rachel

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
9 posted 2007-12-02 12:57 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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