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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733
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Ok everyone, this isn't about me. I wrote this while i was talking to one of my friends. He's going through a really tough time right now and I don't know how to help him. I would really really appreciate it if you could give me any advice. Thanks! Bel Please Don’t hate yourself You don’t realize what you are You overlook what everyone sees You don’t realize what you mean Don’t let the girls get you down It’s not worth it I hate to see you frown I wish they’d just quit I know it’s hard I wish there was something I could do I but I really don’t know How I can help you We have something in common You and I We don’t like something about ourselves And we don’t lie I wish there was something I could do But I know I can’t As much as I want to I know it’s up to you I think I’m too fat You think you’re too thin And just like me You don’t see the beauty within This too shall pass I know it doesn’t seem like it now But I promise it will Though I don’t know how Until then You know I’ll be there Until then Just know I care |
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The_Driven Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 60 |
I dont mean to sound rude, but i think the only way to solve that situation, is for that person to realize for his or herself that he is a better person than who he or she thinks. I mean, you can talk and talk, and talk, but its really up to them to listen, and see for themself. |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
I've known plenty of ppl like this. Infact I've felt this way once or twice. the only thing you can do is smile and be happy for evey thing that you have. Life is to short to worry what others think. you need to just be this persons friend. give him your heart and hope he does the same to you. the easiest way to make a person smile again is to let him know that somebody cares. It's a tough situation but is not as hard to overcome w/ the right mind set Best Regards IsGona |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
Nice message. Without having friends like you, people don't have anything at all. Just make sure your friend alwys feels this loved and he should be okay. Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
Chill out man, just remembe that there are plenty of fish in the sea. If fact, you might even say that they outnumber us. On top of that, If you're really having trouble, just remeber, nine times out of ten, the real problem is in the verbal skills. I can't say too much more about this without getting explicit, but you can e-mail me about it if you want. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
you know nowdays for some reason girls still go for the looks...i dont know why either...i dont love my boyfriend cuz of his looks...i love him for the rest of him...how he treats me, how he cares about me...not because he got a nice body or money like some girls are out for... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Phoebee Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 42Peoria, AZ |
Great poem. I don't know how old you or your friend are, but I think that the older the girl or guy, the more they look for in a mate. Looks are just a bonus....it's what's inside. Let your friend know how you feel, and always be there for him. He'll love you for that. "Everything happens for a reason!" |
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BabyGirl1 Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 91Morris, IL |
This was a wonderful poem for you to write about your friend. Unfortunatly, the situation is not so great. Your friend just needs some time to find out who he is and who he wants to be. This comes only from inside of himself. No one can do this for him. I the mean time, you, as his friend, need to show him that you are there for him and that you care for him for who he is and not what he looks like or what everyone else sees him as. I hope both you and your friend find the true beauty in each of you. "We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can fly only by embracing each other." -Luciano de Crescenzo- |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Realize that if other people can see your strengths, you shouldn't be focusing on your weaknesses. Open your eyes and see that beauty that everyone around you does. Be the person that writes the poetry, not the poem. Thomas A. Plemmons "I could have missed the pain But I'd of had to miss The Dance" -Garth Brooks- |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
well I'd love to give my advice, but as much as I'd like to, every one else has pretty much covered everything. just keep your head up my friend and do your best! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ *~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~* |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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