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Flowers -n- Hearts |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV 
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I wrote this last night, and the paper it is written on, has flowers all around  ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* I keep finding myself, Drawing flowers and hearts. I look into the mirror, To find myself smilin' back. I close my eyes, And see his face. I can't eat, I can't sleep, I just think about him. I guess I'm being shy, Cause he stil doesn't know. I drew his name, With hearts around. I'm totally confused, I don't know what to do. I have no clue, My heart is in charge. Does anyone know, If we're meant to be? (if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- Poetic Bliss 82) *A poets mind never rests, It is always dreaming* |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Only your hearts will know for sure if you guys are meant to be. If you are then let it be and have fun with it, if not, then take it as a learning experience and move on, not with heart ache but with a stronger knowledge. Keep writing. Always~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~My fire is dead,it knew no pain; yet it is dead and I remain: All stiff with ice ashes lie;and they are dead, and I will die~*~ |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
Knowing if it's meant to be.... I think that has to be the hardest thing about growing up, all the emotions. It all works out hte way it should I strongly believe that, just follow your heart best of luck great poem by the way |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
I totally know the feeling. I hope you figure it out. Keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Nicely written Tamma. Hearts have a way of working it out for you, in time. Sometimes the funnest part though, is the daydreaming itself! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
this is a really good poem...if you and this guy were meant to be it will happen...but only if you let it...why dont you tell him how you feel...then you wont be wondering how he feels about you... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
nope...nobody knows if you're meant to be...he doesn't, you don't, your hearts don't even know. Father time has a clue, but he's not even sure. The only way to ever find out is to talk to him...just be cool. Get me his number, I'll hook ya'll up....oh yeah...like the picture, it's pretty. Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
I just wanted to thank you all for responding, and I'll be sure to let him hear this poem (if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- Poetic Bliss 82) *A poets mind never rests, It is always dreaming* |
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Kyle aka Huck Member
since 2000-07-16
Posts 63Linn, MO USA |
its hard to say, all you can do is ask and see ya know, if its meant to be then keep it going and have fun with it cuz once its gone youll regret it immensely |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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