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Meant to be?

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Martini
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Toronto, Ontario, Canada


0 posted 07-15-2000 10:42 AM       View Profile for Martini   Email Martini   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Martini

There is a quiet outside
but nothing but noise in my head
I try to sleep,
but my thoughts crawl back to you

I know that it hasn't been that long
I know I shouldn't rush things
That fate will have her way
And what is meant to be will

But all i can do is dream
of the day we'll be together
When I can call you my own
And dream of you freely

So many people are pushing
For exactly what i am longing for
But I fear that all of their trying
will simply jinx what I want

I don't know what I can do
I don't know what more I can say
I'm afraid of letting you in
But even more that you might slip away

I need to know
when things will be
And how long is must wait to see
If it's truly meant to be


**I wrote this one a long time ago, just after I had met my ex-boyfriend, who turned out to be the love of my life....


"In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On"
~Robert Frost
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TAP2
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since 06-29-2000
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Morris, Il USA


1 posted 07-15-2000 11:38 AM       View Profile for TAP2   Email TAP2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit TAP2's Home Page   View IP for TAP2

Very well written poem. I remember the feeling well, when I met the love of my life.
Keep up the good work.

Thomas

"I could have missed the pain
But I'd of had to miss The Dance"

-Garth Brooks-
Erin
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since 06-15-2000
Posts 2681
~Chicago~


2 posted 07-15-2000 03:46 PM       View Profile for Erin   Email Erin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Erin

i give you props for this poem...it is very good...by the way i like your quote...anyways i wish you luck with this guy...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~
Rayz
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since 07-14-2000
Posts 13
Fresno, CA, U.S.A


3 posted 07-15-2000 04:43 PM       View Profile for Rayz   Email Rayz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rayz

That is a really great poem. I know how you feel. It really showed the feelings of not knowing if he was the one for you. Great job. And continue the great work.

Ray
Chel
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since 07-01-2000
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Baltimore, MD, USA


4 posted 07-15-2000 08:11 PM       View Profile for Chel   Email Chel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chel

I know the feeling.  I am glad everything worked out.  Keep up the good work.

Chel


"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"
Martini
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Toronto, Ontario, Canada


5 posted 07-21-2000 12:12 PM       View Profile for Martini   Email Martini   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Martini

Thanks for all your kind replys

thomas... it's such a confusing yet wonderful time!!  

Erin... I think at thispoint I need a miracle with him instead of luck, we''ve been through so much, I only hope one day we can find our way back together.... he really is the love of my life.

Ray, thanks for the kind words.

Chel, I'm glad it worked out too, and although it's over now, I still have the memories!~!

"In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On"
~Robert Frost
LyricFetish
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since 01-13-2000
Posts 515
North Carolina


6 posted 07-21-2000 02:07 PM       View Profile for LyricFetish   Email LyricFetish   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LyricFetish

Awesome poem you have here. I can definately say I've has these feelings before. Good luck!

*~Mredith~*

It's so obvious
That the promise
Keeps me here
Painting pictures where
All the colors
Disappear
*Lit
Martini
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7 posted 07-21-2000 02:32 PM       View Profile for Martini   Email Martini   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Martini

thanks so much....
I'm glad you enjoyed it

"In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On"
~Robert Frost
StarPryncess17
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8 posted 07-21-2000 07:51 PM       View Profile for StarPryncess17   Email StarPryncess17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit StarPryncess17's Home Page   View IP for StarPryncess17

I must say this is a wonderful one indeed! I'm sorry that it is over now, but all you have to do is look at the situation and say "I have learned" which I'm sure you have. With each and every person you are with in your life you learn something from them. At any cost, I hope you love again. You'll always have a place in your heart for this guy since he is "the love of your life" but you also have to move on. Keep up the good work! Best of luck in life and love! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~


*~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~*
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural


9 posted 12-02-2007 08:26 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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