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You've pushed me over the edge
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You've pushed me over the edge |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Now I know that most o fmy poetry is angry stuff but so many things have been running through my head that I just had to get it out...plain and simple. My demons are my pitfall, But what exactly are my demons? Feelings that I can't control, Or actions that lead to no where? I try my best each day to live, And do what I can to the extent of my ability. Do you appreciate what I do for you? No..Selective memory is an important thing for you. Go and take their word, To be honest, I really don't care anymore. I want to take an eternal break from you, There is only so far you can push me. "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement." Christopher Fry |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
man this is a good poem...i give you props for this poem...i know what you mean about how you need to get things out...its hard to hold them in... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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sorrowfulangel Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 59Memphis,TN |
i think i've felt like that many of times....you have a talent doll... "god is the biggest under-achiever I know,something good happens god is great,something bad happens,he now works in mysterious ways" |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
more power to ya! Sometimes, you've just gotta stand up for yourself. Eventually, One of us will come along, who does appreciate you, and everything you do. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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