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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723
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If I love her I would know it right? This is what I was thinking one night But I don't know it I know only that I think I do And if this is how I feel How can I think my love is true Maybe I can't know true love Maybe I can only believe in it |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Maybe I can't know true love Maybe I can only believe in it" Excellent thoughts IsGona! Your closing is so beautifully worded ... well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
I really like your design here. From a first look it seems quite strange, but it flows so nicely. And it's true, love can be quite illusive. Am I right? jason |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Kit~ I'm glad you liked me poem. If you believe in it it exists Right? This indesision is what makes true love so presious. Jacman~ You are right. Thanks for likeing the format. I've been trying something new to make my work distinct and I appreciate the input. |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Very well written. I liked the intent of the poem. Keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
this is a good poem...id have to agree with kit...the last line is my favorite... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Jay~ Only you can know if love is really true. I know it is possible to feel, you just have to search your soul for it. This was in the past I know, but I still believe it's relevant to everyday life. Great poem!! Jenn "If it's wrong to love you, then my heart just won't let me be right, cause I'm drowned in you, and I won't pull through without you by my side." Mari |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
You and jenn?......i mean i see her poems up and yer poems up.......this can only mean one thing........yer tryin to take over pip! |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Hehehe lol.... Uh-oh Jay, he caught us!!!  "If it's wrong to love you, then my heart just won't let me be right, cause I'm drowned in you, and I won't pull through without you by my side." Mari |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
*hides from dopey* What?  |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
*yells* YOU'RE TRYING TO TAKE OVER PIP!!!! I won't allow it! *doesn't allow it* see! beware....beware  |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
LOL@Dopey....What? Us? Never....! |
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