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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733
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Hey everyone! I know it's been sorta a long time since I've posted anything, but I haven't had much time or much to say for that matter. Well...this one...I don't know what it is really. I guess it's sorta based on my usual topic...but I'm not really sure. Well, here it is, feel free to say whatever you want about it. Thanks Bel Premonition It comes to me constantly No matter day or night Thriving in the back of my mind Knowing I think it’s right Its presence no longer scares me Like it used to long ago It’s been with me so long now Mostly from making myself feel so low It wakes me from my sleep As if to remind me What I am now And what I want to be It lives on fear It lives on trust It lives on simple truth That I believe it because I think I must It may be right Or it may be wrong I may be stupid For believing it for so long It will not go Unless I force it to But is that something That I want to do This premonition Lives inside my mind And what of this premonition Am I going to find |
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Kittie Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 103 |
This is wonderful, and the rhyme works great too! I haven't read your previous work, but it's a great way to come back into the forums! The ending is wonderful, and I really enjoyed reading it. Kittie |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Well written. You really captured the indesision of whether or not to trust your own Premonition. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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