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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again 
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*we all know the feeling of putting an assignment off until the last minute. well, one day i remembered this little english assignment that was due the next period. it was this poem! i had to do rhyme scheme and every thing, but it is my true tribute to slackers everywhere (especially me! i got an A). and i also wanted to lighten the mood in here a little bit. enjoy.* Procrastinating: Easy as Pie I always seem to procrastinate. I never do my work. I put things off until the due date. And there's so much stress it hurts. I always seem to get it done. I never catch the bunch of consequences that come with the fun of doing my work at lunch. "The bar is always open and the time is always right. If god's word goes unspoken, then the music plays all night." -Bradley Nowell |
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BabyGirl1 Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 91Morris, IL |
This is a very cute poem and congrats on getting an A  I too procrastinate."We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can fly only by embracing each other." -Luciano de Crescenzo- |
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ConderE Junior Member
since 1999-08-14
Posts 29TX, USA |
This is a creative poem. I enjoyed it a lot. Write some more poems like this because it is relaxing. |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
I realy like the poem. I think you did a great job. Lovely_Kris |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
man do i know what that feels like...i just graduated and in order to graduate we had to do a senior paper...it had to be 5-7 pages typed...and me the one who put things off didnt do it till the day before...same with my poem an unforgettable friendship...i did that like 10 minutes before class started...i also got an a... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
You certainly did a good job of lightening things up a bit. Loved the poem for it's simplisticness. Thomas "I could have missed the pain But I'd of had to miss The Dance" -Garth Brooks- |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
I am the eternal procrastinator...just ask my forman at work. I like simple effortless procrastination that you put into this poem...how ironic, I'd say. Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I'd give it an A+++ Great poem Ethan! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Great poem. I don't know anyone that doesn't procrastinate once in a while. Well great poem. Glad you got an A. Keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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CLBinLOVE Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 147Hilton Head, SC, USA |
LOL when i read this poem i laughed out loud do you have any idea how many homework assignments i turned in with food stains on them?!?! haha i totally agree with this one very good CLB PS u did lighten the mood for me, thx hehe always follow your heart, never follow others unless it is truely where you want to go, and never give up a dream, maybe just set it aside for a while... :) |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
I would have done so much better in english if I had taken the time to proofread. But that's kind of tough when you only have a half hour to type a paper off of the top of your head. Very well said, and thanks for the tribute, I resembled that remark jason  |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
How true, how true great poem I really enjoyed it |
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dreamy_eyes Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 67 |
I always leave things till the last minute! My mum tells me off and my excuse is "I work better under presure." It's true I always seem to get better marks! Great poem! Love to see more poems like this. Love Deb -x- |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
Great poem, man do I know what that feels like! You can't do that in college so much though. You'll find yourself crashing and burning. |
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Snickers Member
since 2000-05-25
Posts 88East Haddam, CT |
Great work Ethan, very cute poem! I too procrastinate more often than I should, yet somehow it never gets me in trouble! If u can get away with it, what's the problem? ~<3 Alwayz~ **Nikki** ~*~*~*~*"We can complain because roses have thorns, or we can rejoice because thorns have roses." *~*~*~*~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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