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Freedom and Lies |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
I live a lie. I was born free Here in the first world Free from tyranny, Free from starvation Free from the agony my people face every day. But when thet ask me where I was born, I lie. |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Very interesting. Keep up the good work. I hope you really don't deny your birth place. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
Nice poem. I hope to read more of your poems Lovely_Kris |
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Phoebee Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 42Peoria, AZ |
Great poem. It makes me think. I look forward to reading more of your work. "Everything happens for a reason!" |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
You must never, never be afraid to be proud of where you were born. Whether it be in the origin of your ancestory, or anywhere else. Great poem, keep it up. jason  |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
Thanks guys for reading my poem. As trivial as this seems, It is a major identity struggle for me, and has been all throughout my life. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
jose this is a good poem...usually i am amazed with your work...but today i am shocked...why would you deny what you are...you should be proud of who you are and where you come from...if other people dont like it who cares... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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