I Will Never Again be The Other Women....

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Teen Poetry #3

I Will Never Again be The Other Women....

BABYFACE
Junior Member

since 2000-07-09

Posts 17
DALLAS,TX

0 posted 2000-07-12 06:43 PM

I WILL NEVER AGAIN BE THE OTHER WOMEN
ONCE BEFORE I WENT LOW ENOUGH TO BE YOUR OTER WOMEN
NOW I HAVE REALIZED THAT WAS THE BIGGEST MISTAKE I COULD HAVE MADE
BECAUSE YOU JUST USED ME, YOU ACTED LIEK YOU LOVED ME BUT TRUTHFULLY YOU LOVE HER MORE
IT'S NOT FAIR BECUSE YOU KNOW DAMM WELL I THOUGHT YOUR LOVE WAS TRUE
WE WERE TOGETER FOR 4 MONTHS AND HALF OF THAT TIME YOU WERE WITH SOME OTHER GIRL THEN WE FINALLY SPLIT UP AND I COULD NOT LIVE MY LIFE WITHOUT YOU SO I CONTINUED TO SEE YOU
YOU TOLD ME YOU QUIT TALKING TO HER, BUT THEN YOU MET SOMEONE ELSE EVEN THOUGH YOU PROMISED WHEN YOU AND THAT OTHER GIRL BROKE UP WE WOULD BE TOGETHER AGAIN AND STUPID ME BELIVED THAT
WHY? I REALLY DON'T KNOW
BUT NOW YOUR WITH ANOTHER GIRL AND AT FIRST WE STILL SAW EACHOTHER BUT NOW I HAVE SOMEONE ELSE I KNOW IT HERTS TO SEE ME WITH HIM, BUT WHAT WAS I SUPPOSED TO DO BE YOUR OTHER WOMEN WHEN I KNEW AT NIGHT SHE WAS GETTING THE LOVE YOU PROMISED ME
NOT ENYMORE BECAUSE I HAVE SOMEONE THAT GIVES ME ALL OF HIS LOVE AND NOT JUST HALF
AND HE HAS MY HEART, BUT HE WON'T BRUSE AND BREAK LIKE YOU DID
NO MATTER WHAT YOU WILL ALLWAYZ HAVE A SPECIAL PLACE IN MY HEART JUST BECAUSE YOU WERE MY FISRT TRUE LOVE BUT IT'S GONNA BE TOTALLY DIFFERENT FROM NOW ON..

DEDICATED TO MY EX DSR
BYE!!!!!! I WILL MISS YOU BUT THIS IS IT
I AM NOT SORRY BECAUSE YOU DID ALL THE SAME THINGS TO ME!!!!!!

Ethan Halo
Senior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

1 posted 2000-07-12 08:18 PM

very raw emotion in this one. very heartfelt. a little rhythm, i think, would let it read easier, but it communicates the anger and loss very well. well done; thanks for postin.

We all got our demons.
We all got somethin' to atone for.

amazon_lover
Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland

2 posted 2000-07-13 03:45 PM

You had strength and I love it..dont let selfpity overcome you..just life goes on and the experience u gained teches u to hold the right person...

Sincerely
a_l

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2007-12-01 11:05 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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