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Hurrican Floyd |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
One day there was a storm, The wind Blowing strong The trees blowing back and forth; As I stood by the window I heard the rain on the roof And I sat there watching the news They told us a few more minutes I had a bad scare And some had fears The trees came down Powers were out Along came BGE The powers were on When the storm was over The clouds were almost gone The ground was wet Then I knew the storm was over... That was the day Of Hurrican Floyd |
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Kittie Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 103 |
Great poem, I still can't get over the first five lines, and the ending.. Just wow!! Great work, welcome, and keep up your great work... Yes, i'll continue to read more poems, and write them (haha, to your comment) Kittie |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
nice first post. good poem with good rhythm. you captured the day's events well. Welcome to Passions. Hope you enjoy your stay. We all got our demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Welcome to Passions! This is a wonderful first post. I hope to see more of you around here soon!  "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Lovely_Kris! Terrific first post ... hope to read more! Best wishes, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 07-13-2000).] |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Welcome to Passions!!! Great first post. Keep up the good work. I hope to read more from you. Talk to you later. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
I would like to say thanks to all for reading my first poem and i hope you keep reading more of my poems Lovely_Kris [This message has been edited by Lovely_Kris (edited 07-13-2000).] |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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