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Sleeping Beauty
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 4
Washington

0 posted 2000-07-11 08:09 PM



I gave you up once in the past
Though my heart disagreed and wanted you to last
How hard it was is so clear, yet so long ago
And now, once again I'm letting you go

When we met, I was just a little girl
Back then I just wanted to give us a whirl
But the situation just wasn't so
And in the end I let you go

You came back in my life as more than friends
So much stronger, leaving me more strife
But I lost all my senses and let my feelings grow
And there I held off letting you go

I'll always consider you a friend
And defend you till the end
But what I wished just couldn't be so
And once again I'm letting you go.


© Copyright 2000 Kimberly - All Rights Reserved
EroseGrover
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since 2000-07-09
Posts 44
SD,CA 92126
1 posted 2000-07-11 08:14 PM


That is a Wonderful poem so much emotion went into that i can tell!I absoulutly loved it cant wait to see another

Lmost forgot welcome to Passions great first poem!

          ~EroseGrover~


[This message has been edited by EroseGrover (edited 07-11-2000).]

BabyGirl1
Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 91
Morris, IL
2 posted 2000-07-11 10:20 PM


This was a wonderful poem.  It is always hard to have a good friendship turn into a relationship.  Welcome to passions.  Hope to read more of your work soon  

"We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can fly only by embracing each other."

-Luciano de Crescenzo-

Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
3 posted 2000-07-12 01:07 AM


Letting anyone that you care about go is hard...I think we all have been there.  Wonderful words, they are so very true.  Great work!  

*Krista Knutson*

"We are not seperate from spirit, we are in it." ~Plotinus~

TAP2
Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211
Morris, Il USA
4 posted 2000-07-12 10:26 AM


Welcome to the family! Great first post, by the way. Sometimes it's hard to let someone go that you've cherished for so long. Don't worry though, love alwayz finds away back to our hearts.

Thomas< !signature-->

"I could have missed the pain
But I'd of had to miss The Dance"

-Garth Brooks-


[This message has been edited by TAP2 (edited 07-12-2000).]

HerMelness
Junior Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 37
Bridgewater, NS, Canada
5 posted 2000-07-12 10:48 AM


It's a beautiful poem... I can relate to it very easily.. this is a situation that's happened to many of us.. You expressed it very nicely =)

HerMelness
Junior Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 37
Bridgewater, NS, Canada
6 posted 2000-07-12 10:48 AM


It's a beautiful poem... I can relate to it very easily.. this is a situation that's happened to many of us.. You expressed it very nicely =)

HerMelness
Junior Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 37
Bridgewater, NS, Canada
7 posted 2000-07-12 10:49 AM


It's a beautiful poem... I can relate to it very easily.. this is a situation that's happened to many of us.. You expressed it very nicely =)


-Wherever you go, go with all your heart.-

Crystalina123
Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 228

8 posted 2000-07-12 11:18 AM


Ok my dear,
Are you looking into my life because you just described my current situation so accurately it frightens me   Great poem and welcome to the family!!!

Love,
Crystal

When a door closes, another door of oppurtunity opens. The only problem is that most of us are so busy looking at the closed door that we fail to see

essenceofangels
Junior Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 36

9 posted 2000-07-12 11:21 AM


Great first post!Im looking towards to see your other poems! Love ya!
                  essenceofangels      


"Look back on time with kindly eyes"
"A word is dead
When it is said,
Some say.
I say it just
Begins to live
That day."


Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
10 posted 2007-12-01 10:59 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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