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Martini
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0 posted 07-11-2000 07:24 PM       View Profile for Martini   Email Martini   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Martini

He doesn't realize
The amount of power he possess over me
He doesn't realize
How he hold me world in his hands
He doesn't realize
How I worry when he's not near
He doesn't realize
How I feel when he tells me all is ok

Everyday we smile, exchange hellos and laughs
We think of each other often and yet never express it
And as I rest my head on his shoulder
With his jacket laid carelessly over my shoulds I realize
He doesn't realize

Without him in my world it would be worthless
He is part of who I am
He is who I turn to for advice
I support him- and he reassures me
And although we feel it - it has never been said
He is my best friend

© Copyright 2000 Stephanie McMillan - All Rights Reserved
Erin
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1 posted 07-11-2000 07:29 PM       View Profile for Erin   Email Erin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Erin

your life wouldnt be worthless without him in it...it would probably be boring but not worthless...so dont say that...this is a nice poem that you wrote for your best friend...why dont you give it to him then maybe he will realize what he is to you...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~
Martini
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2 posted 07-11-2000 07:38 PM       View Profile for Martini   Email Martini   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Martini

I wrote this poem a long time ago when I thought I was in love with my best friend....

Back then I thought my life wouldb e worthless, now I realize it would be a little emptier, but not worthless...

I just write how I'm feeling at that given moment.

And he knows he's very important to me

"In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On"
~Robert Frost
EroseGrover
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3 posted 07-11-2000 08:11 PM       View Profile for EroseGrover   Email EroseGrover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EroseGrover

To much emotions for me..hehe just kidding
its a wonderful poem and you should always
express how you feel in any way to make him/her to relize! I loved it

     ~EroseGrover~
BABYFACE
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4 posted 07-11-2000 09:19 PM       View Profile for BABYFACE   Email BABYFACE   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BABYFACE

THAT WAS GOOD KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
BabyGirl1
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5 posted 07-11-2000 10:12 PM       View Profile for BabyGirl1   Email BabyGirl1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BabyGirl1

This is a great poem.  It is really hard when they 'don't realize.

"We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can fly only by embracing each other."

-Luciano de Crescenzo-
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6 posted 07-12-2000 11:45 AM       View Profile for Acies   Email Acies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Acies

sometimes you just can't expect a person to be able to read your mind and specially your feelings.  some things have to be said.  great poem....keep it up  
Ethan Halo
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7 posted 07-12-2000 07:34 PM       View Profile for Ethan Halo   Email Ethan Halo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ethan Halo's Home Page   View IP for Ethan Halo

one way streets are the worst ones to travel in a love bug, you know what i mean?  very well penned thoughts. i like your style. i've read two of your works and you have a very "tell-it-like-it-is" style. this is well done.
and i hate to do some monday-morning-quarterbacking, but maybe you should just tell him, and not wait for realization to kick in. =)

We all got our demons.
We all got somethin' to atone for.
Lovely_Kris
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8 posted 07-12-2000 11:44 PM       View Profile for Lovely_Kris   Email Lovely_Kris   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lovely_Kris

What a great poem. I think you did a great job.
lovely_kris
Martini
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9 posted 07-13-2000 10:45 AM       View Profile for Martini   Email Martini   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Martini

Thank you all for your kind words...

And to all of you who keep telling me to tell him....

It has been too long since I wrote this and he is now with a friend of mine, and I have fallen in love with another.

He knows he is a very important person in my life, and that will never change, but it's not a romantic love that I feel for him, but more of a brotherly love....

thanks again for all your kind words
Linzi
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10 posted 07-13-2000 10:49 AM       View Profile for Linzi   Email Linzi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Linzi

This is a wonderful poem, and it was particularly striking to me, because I'm in love with one of my very best friends right now, so I really understood this poem! Beautifuljob!

~*~Linzi~*~

"Ignore reality; there's nothing you can do about it" ~ Natalie Imbruglia

Martini
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11 posted 07-21-2000 12:09 PM       View Profile for Martini   Email Martini   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Martini

Linzi
thanks for your kind thoughts!!!

Whatever happens between you and your best friend, I'm sure it'll be for the best.  I hope you find great happiness.

"In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On"
~Robert Frost
StarPryncess17
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12 posted 07-22-2000 02:10 PM       View Profile for StarPryncess17   Email StarPryncess17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit StarPryncess17's Home Page   View IP for StarPryncess17

Kind and Sweet. I'm glad your friend knows how you feel about him. Just like Acire said, you can't expect any one to read your emotions, sometimes they have to be expressed. Just keep that in mind for future relationships...oh, and do you ever wonder what would have come of you two had to told him the way you felt? just curious. keep up the wonderful work! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~


*~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~*
Martini
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13 posted 07-23-2000 01:51 PM       View Profile for Martini   Email Martini   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Martini

Jessica
thanks for the response....
and no, I don't wonder what wouldh ave happened if I told him because I like the way things are right now....

"In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On"
~Robert Frost
Artic Wind
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14 posted 12-02-2007 08:32 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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