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EroseGrover
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since 2000-07-09
Posts 44
SD,CA 92126

0 posted 2000-07-11 06:25 AM


Friend
Today I meet my friend for life
I knew it when I met her
Her hair so beautiful
Her spirt so free
Caring none at all of what people say about her
Brushing it off as if it never happend
Her eyes are a deep pool you fall into
never relizing you do
I know I will always love her as my
Sister,friend,and soul companion


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Chel
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
1 posted 2000-07-11 09:58 AM


This poem was very well written.  I am glad that you have such a great bond with your sister.  Keep up the good work.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
2 posted 2000-07-11 07:03 PM


this is a really good poem...its cool that you and your sister have such a good relationship...i prefer not to have one with my sister...its not worth wasting my time...and thats all it is...keep up the good work...by the way are you a guy or a girl???

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2007-12-01 10:57 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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