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Teen Poetry #3

Windows of Light

Wet
Member

since 1999-07-25

Posts 60
Brentwood, Tn

0 posted 2000-07-10 11:35 PM

Windows of Light

The love of the night
Releasing stress and problems
From the makers elves.
His workers linger in their
Shelters until the break of the night.
No more shall they suffer.
No more shall they cry out in the night air
Ending comes to a brief mix of light and darkness.
The lamp becomes visible.
But now longing for that it once always had...
Deprived to be transparent to the light of the beholder
Yet now shunned by...
And not called upon...
But now realizing to the existince,
That the light from my lamp
No longer shines through a transparent window,
But an opaque, bleak prison.

TAP2
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 211
Morris, Il USA

1 posted 2000-07-11 10:06 AM

Well penned. Haven't seen your work before, but I like it. Hope to see more.

Thomas

"I could have missed the pain
But I'd of had to miss The Dance"

-Garth Brooks-

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

2 posted 2000-07-11 01:46 PM

Another very deep, dark poem....my favorite kind. Wonderful job! I love it.

*~Meredith~*

It's so obvious
That the promise
Keeps me here
Painting pictures where
All the colors
Disappear
*Lit

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2007-12-01 10:55 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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