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CLBinLOVE
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since 2000-06-04
Posts 147
Hilton Head, SC, USA

0 posted 2000-07-10 04:26 PM



all i need

ive missed you so much
thought about you every day
i miss you in every possible moment
and love you in every possible way

as i sit here i think
think of what you say
i remeber every moment we were together
i try to relive every day

i try to recall
remeber your every touch
try to remeber your kiss
although it doesnt work all that much

as im on the fone with you
you ask whats wrong
i try to tell you that ur not here
and thats what keeps me sad so long

you tell me to cheer up
but thats so hard to do
because no matter how much we talk
id give a world for a kiss from you

if you were here right now
id tell you of my day and week
but i wouldnt want to talk
for a kiss is what id seek

i do love to be with you
and to talk to you is bliss
but i can do that on the fone
right now all i need is a kiss

i wrote this while i was on vacation, i really missed my gf, now im back and im soo glad to see her again


always follow your heart, never follow others unless it is truely where you want to go, and never give up a dream, maybe just set it aside for a while... :)

© Copyright 2000 Craig Baker - All Rights Reserved
Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
1 posted 2000-07-10 04:29 PM


wow what a suprise ending...i thought you would have said how you want her back and all that...but it ended better then i thought it would...this is a good poem...so thats where you were...you were on vacation...i was wondering why i didnt see any new work from you...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

toes21
Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 24

2 posted 2000-07-10 04:33 PM


Your poem is beautifuly written, from the heart.
Jose Marti
Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374
washing DC
3 posted 2000-07-11 12:57 PM


This poem is very good. I can feel the emotion in it. Keep up the good work.
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2007-12-01 10:52 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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