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Chel
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

0 posted 2000-07-10 09:50 AM


This is dedicated to a young lady who is not a member, but comes in to read poems.  She goes to my church and she is hurting a lot on the inside.  I hope that she realizes we all care for her.  

You care about others
You make sure others don't get hurt
You have your own opinions
You care about what others say
You always want people to always be happy
You want everything to be perfect
When things are bad at home you turn to God
You think violence is wrong
You have emotions
You hurt inside, but
Don't let it show
You want to have a normal life, but
No one does
So keep your head up
Don't let your sister put you down
Take care
I will always be here
A church friend


"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

© Copyright 2000 Michelle Y. Plocinik - All Rights Reserved
Jacman
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since 2000-06-27
Posts 291
Dwight Il, US
1 posted 2000-07-10 09:59 AM


I will keep this simple by saying that my prayers are with you whoever you are.

jason

Chel
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
2 posted 2000-07-10 10:57 AM


Jacman, I am glad that you care about the person.  I do to, and all we can do now is pray.  Thanx for reading my poems.

"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

LoveBug
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3 posted 2000-07-10 11:01 AM


Everyone goes through tough times in their lives, some get it tougher than others. But that's because the Lord knows that they can handle it. I'm glad that your friend knows where to turn when bad things happen. He will give you strength, my friend. You'll be in my prayers.

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A
4 posted 2000-07-10 03:29 PM


I hope both of your faiths remain stronger than mine.  

Jeremy

"Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade."

TearsOfPearls
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since 1999-09-23
Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa
5 posted 2000-07-10 04:37 PM


I'll be thinking of this lady, and she'll be in my prayers tonight, no better heeling power that praying.



Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach.

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
6 posted 2000-07-10 04:40 PM


chel i think that you should give this to her to let her know you care...then maybe she wont feel the way she feels...maybe she wont turn to poems to describe her pain...she'll have a friend to turn to...someone she can talk to...not read a story of her life off of a piece of paper...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
7 posted 2000-07-10 06:51 PM


This is a lovely gesture toward your friend Chel! I hope you were able to share this with her.

Best wishes and prayers to you both!
/Kit

Jose Marti
Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374
washing DC
8 posted 2000-07-11 12:41 PM


This poem is very beautiful. I hope she better. If she can feel as good as we do reading this poem, she's already better.
BabyGirl1
Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 91
Morris, IL
9 posted 2000-07-11 10:33 PM


THis is a beautiful poem and you are a wonderful friend for writing this to her.  We do all go through hard times in life and it is always nice to have a good friend there for us.  The two of you are in my prayers.

"We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can fly only by embracing each other."

-Luciano de Crescenzo-

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
10 posted 2007-12-01 10:58 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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