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Say Love |
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Linzi Junior Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 35Pennsylvania, USA |
Words are words, and nothing more Words can break a heart, I'm sure Carelessly used, without regard For outcome, consequence, or harm One may say "love" Without feeling love at all The same of "hate" and "fear" is true So do I dare, say "love" to you? For how can I say "love", When you've heard it much before? How can I say "love" When I'm not even truely sure How do I say "love" To someone I've known so long? What if I say "love" and it turns out that I'm wrong? I can't risk losing you, you mean way too much to me But how can I keep these feelings under lock and key? I know I need to tell you But I just can't find the words How can I say "love" When what I feel is so much more? ~*~Linzi~*~ "Ignore reality; there's nothing you can do about it" ~ Natalie Imbruglia |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
wow very well writen. I can feel the inner conflict in the poem. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful Linzi! You've expressed your conflicting emotions well in this, nicely penned! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
You've got a fan over here in my corner. I didn't think twice about voting for this one. Keep it up... jason  |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
I know the feeling. Keep up the good work. This poem was very well written. If you ever wanna talk email me. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
this is a good poem LINZI...why dont you just tell this person what you want to tell them...and if they dont feel the same for you its not worth it...keep up the good work...i will be reading more from you... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Phoebee Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 42Peoria, AZ |
So hard...so confusing! It is always best to tell that special someone how you feel. "Everything happens for a reason!" |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Good job in depiction and in word. Very well penned. The inner conflict shows thruogh in this piece. Thomas "I could have missed the pain But I'd of had to miss The Dance" -Garth Brooks- |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
Good poem. You should at least try to tell him how you feel. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
unfortunately, we don't have a single description of "love" one of the biggest mysteries of life i guess nothing in life is for certain, life is a big gamble. there are some things in life that have to be said or done |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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