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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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Infinity Love has consumed, Lust has overwhelmed, Obsession is addictive, You drive me insane. I can try to be patient, I can attempt to forget, I will try to block my thoughts of you, But it's hard to put an end to infinity. One day when I least expect it, One day when I have forgotten your eyes, One day when your scent grows faint, We will meet again... Love is postponed, Lust is stunted, Obsession subsides, Sanity can return. |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Jenn, Great work. Expressive in every way, I love the ebb and flow of the whole thing. Can't wait to see more of your work. Thomas |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Well done Jenn! The form and flow worked very well with your sentiments ... keep up the great writing! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
well this one is good as well. did i miss any of your work well i was gone for a few days? i hope not and if i did let me know and i'll catch up ok. keep it up as always. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
Jenn, you are becoming one of my favorites. you got my vote on this one. jason |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
Wow...I think I'm gonna start reading from you now. This poem was great. The quick progression and rhythm made it more exciting and the wit of every stanza was nice. Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
what can i say...this is i think the first poem that i read by you...and i really liked it...and how you said "we will meet again" i agree...you will forget all about this person then out of nowhere they appear in your life again...its happened to me... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is very well written. So, limited words in each line can make so much sense.  Great job!!!Love is postponed, Lust is stunted, Obsession subsides, Sanity can return. What more can i say? I can't belive i missed this one. I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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