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Wicced_Witch
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since 2000-02-06
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Clarksville, TN, USA

0 posted 2000-07-08 02:39 PM


From the day that I first met you,
I had a feeling we'd be close.
I have never been more wrong,
You turned on me when I needed you most.

I thought you were a true friend.
Lord, how cuold I have been so blind.
You worked on gaining my trust,
Just to stab me from behind.

You were a girft from the gods above,
Or that is what was in my head.
I would have done anything for you,
But the trust we had is dead.

Time can do a lot of good or harm.
But it took little for what you had done.
You had to mess up our entire lives.
If his daddy's in jail, what will happen to my son.

He never did anything to you,
so don't act like what you did was sweet.
Because of you, he will be locked up.
And that's how him and his will first meet.

We always talked about alot of things,
But what mattered you left unspoken.
It runined my life as well as his.
All because of a trust broken.

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Jenn Cirrincione
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1 posted 2000-07-08 02:42 PM


I hear you...sometimes it's okay to trust... I learned long ago to protect myself from being to trusting, getting walked on tends to do that to a person.
Jenn

Chel
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
2 posted 2000-07-09 07:20 AM


This question, let's me think a lot in my head.  I like to wonder.  Keep up the good work.  Always do your best, and be careful of the people you trust.

Chel


"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

TAP2
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since 2000-06-29
Posts 211
Morris, Il USA
3 posted 2000-07-09 10:08 AM


It hurts most when the trust we give is thrown away like so much chattle. Beautifully expressed. Keep up the good work.

Thomas

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
4 posted 2000-07-10 03:58 PM


well this is a really good poem...i know this feeling to well...i know what you are trying to say...this happened to me...but friends come and friends go...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2007-12-01 10:51 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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