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Chel
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

0 posted 2000-07-08 08:25 AM


The One


I saw you in my dreams
I know you saw me too
I hear your voice
You are talking to me
I hear you whisper

I know your the one
I have been waiting all my life
You have been here forever
I just see you now
I know your the one

Its too late, you have found someone new
What should I do?
I know I need you
Your the one

I love you forever
Your my new security
I know I am happy when your here
What have I done?
Your the one

I feel your kiss
I soon wake up to find you near
I know now
Your the one


"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

© Copyright 2000 Michelle Y. Plocinik - All Rights Reserved
Jose Marti
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 374
washing DC
1 posted 2000-07-08 09:23 AM


The poem was exelent. You're so sweet. I like how the poem ends. I hope you'll be with this guy soon.
Chel
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
2 posted 2000-07-09 01:45 PM


Jose, thanx for reading my poem.  I am glad that you enjoyed it.  I hope to read more of your poems.  Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

Kittie
Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 103

3 posted 2000-07-09 09:15 PM


Sis, you know what i'm gna say, but.. here's another thought- I REALLY LIKE IT!! I didn't really think you would write stuff like this (no offense) but it's in you, and I'm glad you're into writing like me!  Kittie, aka, Sis


Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2007-12-01 10:49 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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