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FlipAngel Junior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 46Prior Lake, MN, USA |
~*FLY*~ Mirror, mirror in my heart don't be afraid to show your face I know you may feel safe in there hiding in disgrace Mirror, mirror in my soul don't you want to stop the pain? We can end it all, here and how just reveal your one true name Show yourself to the world with confidence and pride And that bit of hope you once thought lost will replenish itself inside Yes, there will be those who will try to crush that pride But keep the faith, don't be scared God is on your side Mirror, mirror now you're ready Come on, don't be shy! Your wings of hope and happiness will show you how to fly ~*Yesterday is gone, let go of the past; tommorrow will bring new hope to grasp*~ |
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BabyGirl1 Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 91Morris, IL |
This is a wonderful poem! I really liked how you used the mirror and the ending was great. If you just keep your head up and go for things in life instead of holding back, you are able to fly. |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
I love your work. You've made me a permanent fan. The rhyme and rythm of this piece and picturesque depictions are wonderful. You got my vote. Thomas |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
oh wow flip...i really do like your work...this is such a good peom...i liked it how you used mirror mirror...i give you mad props for this poem...i really hope it makes it to the book...you have my vote... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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