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Comfrey83
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since 2000-04-02
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Winchester, Mass USA

0 posted 2000-07-06 05:53 PM


another night like any other
in this tension i did smother
between a wall of solid grief
i found the kiss that brought relief
and in dreams i found once more
the grace upon me before my door
while a life of tension
soon forgotten amidst knots
bursting in my stomach

she kissed me.
Ive forgotten everything save a face
a charm i couldnt help  embrace


© Copyright 2000 Andrew SJogren - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2000-07-06 07:05 PM


This is a beautiful love poem! I'm glad that you've found someone that makes you feel this way. Keep up the good work!

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea

Comfrey83
Junior Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 36
Winchester, Mass USA
2 posted 2000-07-06 11:17 PM


i dint find anyone. actaully went down in flames today but its all good. its kind of a rip off of a poem called "jenny kissed me". i reccomend that poem if mine didnt get to you
Artic Wind
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3 posted 2007-12-01 10:36 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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