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Wicced_Witch
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since 2000-02-06
Posts 110
Clarksville, TN, USA

0 posted 2000-07-06 05:04 PM


BIG Steve,

You are like the sun to me, you bring light into my life and help me see through the problems that i face.

You brighten up my day, shine through the gloom and despair that I sometimes find.

The path i am travelling, shaky and unknown, is shown to my by your wisdom, guidance, and the rays of like you shine, so that I can see the ways

© Copyright 2000 Stephanie Elliott - All Rights Reserved
Chel
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
1 posted 2000-07-06 05:07 PM


I liked this poem, and I am glad that you have a bond with your brother.  Good luck with your other poems.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
2 posted 2000-07-06 05:32 PM


thats cool that you and your brother are so close...me and my sister cant talk for 5 minutes without fighting...seems like yous are more then brother and sister but friends...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2007-12-01 10:33 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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