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Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

0 posted 2000-07-05 04:20 AM


Well, just over a month ago, I entered this forum for the very first time.  I had no idea what to expect, but anything I could have has been surpassed.  The moments of remorse, cheer, dreamlike awe, and intriguing curiousity I've felt have been an experience I'll always keep with me long after I've left the forum.  My 200th post isn't going to be for or by me...it's going to be for and by all of you.  I'm going to start this with one line and anyone who'd like to may give me a like or a stanza to add...just give it to me as a reply and I'll add them daily.  Please, only serious replies.  I've very excited to see what kind of piece of work we can all create together.......


As I peered upon your heart, mine changed...
and soon, my life was re-arranged.
My soul grew stronger and I didn't hate anylonger.
For to have you along made me stronger.
Years of coldness, melted now.
Sitting around this campfire
makes you even more profound.
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"Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade."




[This message has been edited by Jeremy Halstead (edited 07-06-2000).]

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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2000-07-05 06:54 AM


***
And soon, my life was re-arranged,
***

Congratulations on your 200th post Jeremy!!! Keep up the great writing!

Best wishes,
/Kit

buttercup411
Junior Member
since 2000-07-03
Posts 41
miami, fl, u.s
2 posted 2000-07-05 09:42 AM


my soul grew stronger.
*_+~#@%&**+&^~+*&^~~"+*#@~?"+*

This is a very good idea... and congrats on ur 200th annivesary.. : )


thanks for reading,
love....
buttercup

Crystalina123
Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 228

3 posted 2000-07-05 11:35 AM


And I didn't hate the world any longer.

** Congrats Jeremy!!

Love,
Crystal

Maybe God has us meet a few wrong people so that when we meet the right one we can truly appreciate the gift.

Chel
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
4 posted 2000-07-05 12:20 PM


But to have you along made me stronger

Congrats! Keep up the good work.

Michelle (Chel)

"True friends stab you in the front"

Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
5 posted 2000-07-05 03:34 PM


congrats on your 200th post...im right behind you buddy...im slowly catching up...haha...im sorry that i dont have anything to add right now...but hopefully i will soon...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
6 posted 2000-07-05 04:20 PM


well i'm voteing cause well its a good idea and its from each of was. well add this for me

    Sitting around this campfire
     Makes you look even more
             Profound

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
7 posted 2007-12-01 08:05 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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