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Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~

0 posted 2000-07-04 04:57 PM



There is a girl I call my best friend,
and I know that she will always be there.
She has been my friend for a long time,
I believe that she really does care.

She always has a smile,
crossed upon her face.
Unless she is mad,
putting others in there place.

She tells you what she knows,
rarely hearing any lies.
You will only know the truth,
if you look in her big brown eyes.

But then one day,
I couldnt find my best friend.
Looking in the mirror,
i realized our friendship reached its end.


~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

© Copyright 2000 Erin Erbs - All Rights Reserved
StarPryncess17
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since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
1 posted 2000-07-04 04:59 PM


Dearest Erin~ hey look I'm the first to reply!! heheehe I feel special! anyways, I'm sorry to hear your friendship ended so abruptly! Keep your head up my friend! Easier said than done yes I know, but it will eventually prove to be true. Love Always~*~Jessica~*~

~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~
~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
2 posted 2000-07-04 05:05 PM


well jessica i wrote this a while ago when me and my best friend stopped talking...but things have changed...they are back the way they were once before...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

StarPryncess17
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since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
3 posted 2000-07-04 05:11 PM


Oh erin! I'm so glad to hear it!! Best of luck to you both for many years to come!!  

~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~
~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~

Jeremy Halstead
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since 2000-06-01
Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A
4 posted 2000-07-05 03:20 AM


Erin...I've been going through a departure from all of my best friends for the last year.  We were the tightest, most open, invloved group of guys and gals that I'd ever heard of.  We formed and met just just after reaching adulthood.  Now.. work, fiancees, babies, and who know's what else has had us pulled apart for a long time.  We all live so close together, but nothink is the same.  I'm never going to have these people back, so I'm particularly happy to know that you gained back your heart.

Jeremy

"Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade."

Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
5 posted 2000-07-05 04:30 PM


well i don't know how this feels cause i've always had my best friend to talk to. but i rather enjoyed the poem and hope to see more from you.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


BabyGirl1
Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 91
Morris, IL
6 posted 2000-07-05 08:16 PM


This poem really sums up what I am going through right now.  I just lost two of my best friends.  I am just glad that you got yours back.  Great Poem!
Candy
Junior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 17

7 posted 2000-07-06 02:05 AM


Great poem! Ive lost my best friend. I was loyal to her, she was all i had. she got into the wrong crowd,left me for them and that was the end of us. so i underatnd what you are saying. I look forward to reading more from you.

Candy

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
8 posted 2007-12-01 10:27 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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