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Teen Poetry #3

Your Only Sunshine

jennie may*
Member

since 2000-06-17

Posts 122

0 posted 2000-07-03 11:45 PM

the rain is thick

the afternoon
giggles at me

and you

behind me
still
chasing my skirt

until I give in

your hair
wet with
the gray sky

dark eyes
with ocean of
secrets
for me to drown in

I love them

I hope they
remember

I am your
sunshine...

your only sunshine

TAP2
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 211
Morris, Il USA

1 posted 2000-07-03 11:54 PM

You've conveyed so much. It can be interpreted as so many different things in so many different ways. I love your style! The choppy flow makes a rythm of it's own in the heart. Please let us see more!

TAP2

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

2 posted 2007-12-01 08:01 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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