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Ben Singleton Junior Member
since 2000-05-02
Posts 18 |
The last few weeks Have been the best in my life Spending time with you And having a laugh. I love being with you When were alone together Sharing all our deep secrets That we will keep forever. You've got the prettiest face That shines wherever you go Stands out in a crowd Like a silk ribbon bow. Your voice sings to me Like the birds in the morning Your blonde hair stands prettier Than the sun in the dawning You're a lovely person Who's clever and smart Fate put us together To not be apart. You're the quench to my thirst The red rose for my love Your voice,ever so sweet Like the coos from a dove. |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
I liked your poem very much. I hope to see some more. It was very well put together and I understood it. Keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Beautiful!! Your poem signifies the true meaning of true love! Glad to hear that you're so happy with your love! Keep up the writing and show us more of what you can do! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~ ~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~ |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
this is a very good poem i understand it well and i like how you express yourself here. i thank you for posting this and shareing it with us. and hope to see more from you. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a beautiful poem! I'm so glad that you have someone like this in your life. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Ben Singleton Junior Member
since 2000-05-02
Posts 18 |
Cheers Everyone for your replies and I will hope to Post some more soon. |
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Xavier New Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 1 |
This pome was very well done, im glad to know you would have someone that special to spend your life getting to know even more i hope to see more of your work soon... Xavier |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
whoever you wrote this poem for should feel very special...because it is BEAUTIFUL...if my boyfriend ever wrote me a poem like this...i would probably cry from being so happy...keep up the good work... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
I love the metaphores you used at the end...they are a true part of this art. Your poem reminds me of the enchntment I once felt and someday will again. Jeremy. "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This was lovely Ben! So sweetly romantic and caring ... what a lucky lady who shares your heart. Wonderful and flowing poem! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Ben Singleton Junior Member
since 2000-05-02
Posts 18 |
I'm Glad to know you all liked the poem, thanks for all your replys |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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