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Teen Poetry #3

I Feel

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

0 posted 2000-07-02 12:50 PM

    I feel pain each day i live
     I feel love each day I'm
              Dead
Ideas consumed, changing all the time
           In my head
From the times in my life when the walls
            Were read
Telling the stories of when the walls
            Were red
  Through out the time i liad scared
             In bed
Thinking of what the vocies had said

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

sorrowfulangel
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 59
Memphis,TN

1 posted 2000-07-02 04:20 AM

it sounds like you lead a tough life,keep on truckin` doll -smiles-

"god is the biggest under-achiever I know,something good happens god is great,something bad happens,he now works in mysterious ways"

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

2 posted 2000-07-02 08:46 AM

Hey there. It was yet again a very well written poem. I somehow seem to put myself into the poem and its very true. Keep writing.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

3 posted 2000-07-02 11:09 AM

I understand your pain my friend! I'm sorry you've felt so much pain in your life! I hope things start to look up for you soon! Keep your chin up and if you ever need anything you know my e-mail address! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~

~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~
~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2007-11-22 05:31 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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