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Zombie Man
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 52
Va

0 posted 2000-07-01 09:31 PM



I ask myself everyday is this love of ours true?
Is it going to last for a long time to come?
Or just a short while that will soon fade away.
Not one day goes by when my mind don't think of you.
I know I love you and you love me.
And I do believe we will stay together.
While my life changes all because of you.
Darkness and agony leave my head.
When your love and joy floods my heart.
Because of what you have done I thank you.
I don't really know anything I can do.
But I do know what to say.
I love you!


© Copyright 2000 Michael Cheeseman II - All Rights Reserved
Chel
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
1 posted 2000-07-01 09:46 PM


I loved that poem.  It was very sweet and I hope that its for someone special.  I hope to read more from you and don't let a talent like this disappear.

Chel

StarPryncess17
Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
2 posted 2000-07-01 11:23 PM


Nicely written!! I love the way you personalized it so well~I  haven't seen much work from you but I do hope to see some more because you are a truly talented writer!! Keep it up! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~

~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~
~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
3 posted 2000-07-02 12:16 PM


yes yes very well done i love this piece and hope to read more of you soon and keep this kind of stuff up because you are the Zombie you are LOL

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2007-11-22 05:30 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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