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a special friend |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
So many times I've cried and wished for you to be there missing you is too much to deal with I've never had a friend like you before someone who really understands me and would be there for me no matter what I wish there was a way I could show you how much you mean to me and how much I care for you Too many times we haven't spoken too many times we haven't see each other too many times I wish to see you I'm a friend forever for you no matter what might stand in the way I will fight to be right beside you My sholder is always there for you to cry on my ears are always there to hear what is bothering you My life has changed so much since you've come in it I'm a better person now and I'm happier with you in it Whenever you need me I'll be there Whenever you need to talk I'll be there Whenever you need to cry I'll be the one to hug you You are my sister you are my angel you are my bestest friend in the world "The time to hesitate is through"-Jim Morrison True love requires patience. |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
Sisterly love is the sweetest thing to me...especially when it's in a poem. I'm quite sure your sister is tickled pink by this. Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
well you got my vote on such a sweet poem. this truely speaks of a love you have for her and its the best kind cause your blood. enjoyed the read. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
Thanks guys, I'm glad you liked it. She actually isn't my sister, but in a way she is. She's just my best friend, and she means the world to me. Again thanks. smiles  poe  "The time to hesitate is through"-Jim Morrison True love requires patience. |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
I loved this poem. It made me think about the poems my sister wrote to me. I think its great that you and your sister have that bond. It is very sweet. Chel |
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cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
I think you are a great friend.. Even to right a poem like this.. I'm sure she loved it and took it in to really know now how you fill about her!!! Loved it keep it up! |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
This is a great poem, I also actually have a friend like this, we are very fortunate Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach. |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
Thanks for your replies guys, I'm glad you all could relate to it and that you liked my poem. I actually haven't shown this to her, so she hasn't seen it yet, but she has seen another that was for her called my angel. Again thanks for your replies, smiles poe "The time to hesitate is through"-Jim Morrison True love requires patience. |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
sounds like you two share something simply devine!! I'm glad that you have someone in your life who proves true to you! Keep up the wonderful writing and best of luck with you and your friend! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~ ~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~ |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
Thanks a lot Jessica, I'm glad you liked it. My name happens to be Jessica too. Anyways, thank you all for replying to my poems. smilesPassionsoe "The time to hesitate is through"-Jim Morrison True love requires patience. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a beautiful and wonderful tribute to your friend Poe_32! I hope you were able to share this with her ... you are both so lucky indeed to have each other! Well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
well this is a BEAUTIFUL poem...i really like it alot...that reminds me of how me and my best friend are...you have my vote... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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ValerieB726 Junior Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 14Louisville,OH, USA |
this was great. i feel the same way with my siters but you put the feelings in wonderful words! good luck in all you do. valerie If at first you don't succeed, dust yourself off and try again. |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
I really liked this one a lot. I think it'd make the perfect addition to the book  .~Susie "Do you love me because I am beautiful, or am I beautiful because you love me?" ~Cinderella |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
Wow, I didn't expect there to be that many replies. I haven't checked it in a couple days now but I didn't expect anyone to reply to it again. Thanks a lot guys for your replies and your votes, I'm glad you all could relate to it in a way. Hope to hear from you all soon. smiles Poe "The time to hesitate is through"-Jim Morrison True love requires patience. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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