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Rockhead01
Junior Member
since 2000-06-26
Posts 12
Maryland, USA

0 posted 2000-07-01 12:24 PM


Valentine

If I love you and you love me
I know right then we were meant to be
Feeling your warm body close to mine
Would make me happy for all time
I'll always love you, whatever you do
If we have a problem, we'll work it through
I'll give you what you want no matter how hard
I'll give you my love straight from the heart
I have a statement and it's honestly true
So believe me when I say "I love you"
I love the way the wind blows through your hair
And how your sweet aroma flows through the air
I love the way your body feels warm against mine
And how your precious lips taste sweet like wine
When I think of you only good things come to mind
And all those good things in you I hope to find
I love you so much words cannot explain
If I cannot have you, I will surely go insane
I do not care if you're pretty or not
In my eyes you'll always be hot
You're the best thing that has ever happened to me
We are like two doves nestled in a tree
I cannot stand us being apart
You're the only thing that can fill my heart
I've thought long and hard and think it's time
So please, oh please, will you be my valentine?

-This poem was written a long time ago and is not what my writing is like now but I hope you like it anyways.
~Dan~


Make Love
Not War

© Copyright 2000 Dan Youngs - All Rights Reserved
Ethan Halo
Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793
on the roof again
1 posted 2000-07-01 01:40 AM


well penned thoughts. and i know what you mean in those comments at the end. i used to write nice stuff like that too. i hope the feelings return to you. cause if there's one thing i know, it's that the the past, she never let's go.

We all got our demons.
We all got somethin' to atone for.


Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
2 posted 2000-07-01 03:00 AM


well i voted just to let you know because i really enjoyed this read so thanks for posting it and i hope to read more from you real soon so keep it up.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A
3 posted 2000-07-01 03:56 AM


AAAAHHHHH..Young love...how can I count the ways this makes my heart melt.  You did a great job "proving" in the poem that you really were in love...nice jobby.

Jeremy

"Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade."

Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
4 posted 2000-07-01 02:32 PM


dan...i really liked this poem...you have my vote...it is such a cute poem...oh if you were to give this to me on valentines my heart would melt...even if it was a long time ago but i like it alot...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

StarPryncess17
Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
5 posted 2000-07-02 11:35 AM


Dan~you've definately got my vote!! I hope that you still write like this at least every now and then, because it is simply wonderful! Keep it up! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~

~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~
~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~

TAP2
Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211
Morris, Il USA
6 posted 2000-07-02 12:22 PM


Nothing wrong with this poem. Wouldn't be anything wrong with you still writng like this either. I think it's a good piece.
TAP2

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
7 posted 2007-11-24 07:20 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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