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Misty Blue
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since 2000-05-24
Posts 44


0 posted 2000-06-29 09:32 PM


Apologize


Don't do it out of sympathy
I know you don't feel for me
I've come to realize not everything will go my way
But I hoped you were the one that would stay
Is this what you think I deserve?
If so you've got some nerve
An apology is all I ask
I can't believe I thought it would last
You were the one I most respected
"I'm sorry," you say?
Well, apology excepted

© Copyright 2000 Misty Blue - All Rights Reserved
Nikkisweet
Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183
Tx, Dallas
1 posted 2000-06-29 10:54 PM


That is a really good poem.  There are lots of people I need to say I'm sorry to and you expressed that in the best way.  Keep up the good work.

Within you I lose myself.
Without you I find myself wanting to become lost again.
-unkown-

Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
2 posted 2000-06-30 03:41 AM


this is a very beautiful poem...and it is nothing but the truth...if i can turn back the hands of time and tell everyone i have hurt to say sorry...i would...but i cant do that...i should have done it long ago...but i didnt...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665
Twilight Zone
3 posted 2000-06-30 10:21 AM


It shows me how big a person you are by being able to forgive even if you don't know whether it was sincere or not.  Good for Ya.
Jacman
Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291
Dwight Il, US
4 posted 2000-06-30 02:31 PM


You couldn't have been more on the money with this one.  Sometimes a simple "I'm sorry," makes a world of diffrence.  Nice piece, keep it up.
Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
5 posted 2000-07-01 02:01 AM


great piece. rather enjoyed this read so please keep it up i hope to read more real soon.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


StarPryncess17
Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
6 posted 2000-07-02 11:58 AM


Sometimes an apology is all you need to get over even the biggest of hills. I'm sorry that you felt pain but I'm glad that you got what you needed to find it in your heart to forgive this person! Keep it up! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~

~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~
~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~

Danny Holloway
Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
7 posted 2000-07-06 10:17 AM


And so life goes, one lesson at a time.
~~nice writing~~


A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.



Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
8 posted 2007-12-01 10:30 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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