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A Love Poem
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A Love Poem |
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Rockhead01 Junior Member
since 2000-06-26
Posts 12Maryland, USA |
"You" I look into your big brown eyes And your whisper in my ear seems to hypnotize You make the sun shine with your beautiful smile And waiting for your love will be well worth while When we kiss, your lips taste sweet like wine That sweet taste i love when your lips meet mine Your skin is so soft like silk to my touch I don't think anyone can love someone as much All i see in my dreams is me holding you tight Just walking on the beach under the warm moonlight This relationship we have is but so rare It is but so rare that nowhere, this, you will find I'm reminded of you by the dawning of a new day You shine your light on all the times that are gray |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
this is a really great piece i think you should summit it for the book. and i hope you showed this to who its about. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Vball Chickie1624 Member
since 2000-05-14
Posts 116New York |
This is a beautiful poem, I love it. I'm glad you found that rare love. Good luck. Keep writing Luv ya, Danielle  "Dream what you want to dream; go where you want to go; be what you want to be, because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
this is one of the nicest poems that i have ever read...i really liked it...you know that it is very hard to find someone that will love you in return if you show this person love...and i am glad that you found that special someone... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
This is a really good poem...it brings tears in my eyes. I agree with Jerimaha, you should really show this poem to the girl you love. It would make her so happy. Wonderful poem. |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Oh, and why can't anyone write something like this for me?  Seriously, though, this is a beautiful love poem. (And who knows love poems better than a LoveBug?) I'll be anxiously awating your next beautiful piece. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
http://s227.photobucket.com/albums/dd150/arcticwind_photos/th_dreamworks2.jpg Boy on the Moon Alone, I sat, On the mid of night moon, Talking to the stars, For the sun would come soon. I watched the meteors As they danced in the night. I sang with the stars “Twinkle, twinkle, so bright.” The moon and I, Looked upon the dark sky, Singing a lullaby As stars streaked by. “Goodnight”, said the moon. “May you have sweet dreams, --Of wonderful places, And of stars and moon beams.. Star dust came upon me, As I lifted up from the moon. The Big Dipper scooped me, Like a gigantic spoon. The stars all smiled, As I slipped off to a dream land. My eyes were sprinkled, With star, sleeping sand. Asleep on my bed Underneath mother moon, When the bright sun rises, I will awake soon. |
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