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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
well this has nothing to do with any kid of mine cause i have none. but i have a friend well not so good after this happened. ok this is a poem i wrote through her eye's because she got well you know and diden't want to tell her parents and started doing drugs to try to kill the baby. rather sad i think but the baby was born named Jewel a girl and now lives in a nice home with her grand parents. Rainy days come and go So does sleight and snow Joyous glows now all gone Because my child was Still Born I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
Hey man, short can be very sweet... or bitter sweet, which I think is the situation in this case. I'm glad the baby has a chance to live and hope you can forgive your friend. Try to help her understand why she was wrong..help her be a better person from now on...be her friend. Jeremy D. Halstead "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a short but well-written poem. It's so sad that this happens to innocent babies every day, and I'm glad that this child got a chance at life. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Vball Chickie1624 Member
since 2000-05-14
Posts 116New York |
This is a very well written short poem. It's a sad thing that happened. I'm sorry. Keep writing!! Luv ya, Danielle  "Dream what you want to dream; go where you want to go; be what you want to be, because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
This just goes to show that Life is more important than drugs and not telling your parents about being pregnant! I'm very sorry to hear this has been an issue in you and your friend's life! I'm glad to hear that everything is ok though! I hope everything works out for the baby and your friend! God bless! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ p.s. Is the baby ok...after the drugs and all?!?! ~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~ ~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~ |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
first of all thank you all for replieing to this very important issue in my life. and Jessica the baby is fine. she made out good thank god. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
well another poem by you that i liked...you write very well and i admire your poems...im really sorry to hear what your friend did...but some people these days dont think before they do things...like having unprotected sex...she made a mistake and thank god that the baby is ok...some people arent that lucky...but what JEREMY said about being a friend...what would you do if she didnt want your help???you cant do anything... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
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