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Wisdom
New Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 8

0 posted 2000-06-26 03:35 PM

Fear of Feeling that wonderful pain,
But to do without would drive insane.
Hearing echoes of your voice calling my name,
And it's me for this maddness I have to blame,
Losing you, for playing some stupid game,
now when our eyes meet it will never be the same.

Me staring at your body,
You staring at mine,
Both of us knowing,
It's truly over this time,
So now here I sit writing this weary rhyme.
Because I'm to afraid to call
Because it would cause,
So much pain.
And all those painful memories,
And I know you think the same,
Would only hurt me more,
Because they'd bring you,
So much pain.

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

1 posted 2000-06-26 03:48 PM

Wisdom~very well written! I think all of us can relate to this at some point. This is a feeling I know all too well. But, I will tell you this much-you will find your true love and when you do there will be no one else who could ever replace that person! You will feel so completely overwhelmed by compassion that you'll forget all this pain you're going through right now.Until then, keep your chin up!

Best of Luck! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~

~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~
~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~

Lonelypoet
Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 123
Conklin,NY,USA

2 posted 2000-06-26 06:18 PM

Great poem. Hope this didn't actually happen to you but if it did I hope you find peace my friend.

CLBinLOVE
Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 147
Hilton Head, SC, USA

3 posted 2000-06-26 11:22 PM

i like this one, good ryme and rythem, and nicely chosen word with a well placed feeling behind em
( man i alwaysend up sounding like some teacher grading something when i do this...)
good poem, jus had to vote

always follow your heart, never follow others unless it is truely where you want to go, and never give up a dream, maybe just set it aside for a while... :)

LoveBug

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Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

4 posted 2000-06-27 12:06 PM

This is a wonderful poem, but it's so sad. I hope everything works out for you, it usually does in the long run.

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

5 posted 2000-06-27 01:11 AM

yes your true love will come one day. cause mine did but i lost her all to soon in life to a bullet in the head R.I.P Melissa. but great poem and love the style.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

6 posted 2007-11-18 03:31 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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