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BGirl_Princess New Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 7Burlington, Ontario, Canada |
Alrite, this is a poem called "Drop of Blood" that I wrote when I was happy about a certain friend being around for me... I was rushed to the hospital because I had drank way to much and was puking up blood, and she was there for me through everything.. thanks, girl  A single drop of blood Showing us what is true Promising each other “I’m always here for you” A single drop of blood No bigger than a tear As we tell each other We’ll never live in fear A single drop of blood That doesn’t bring us pain Proving that our friendship Will forevermore remain A single drop of blood Pricelessly given to a friend Pushing away their sorrow So the injured heart can mend A single drop of blood With a meaning unspoken Symbolizing a friendship That can not be broken ~The world only hurts you because it can. You mustn't simply allow it to, you must put up a fight.~ -*Tina a.k.a. BGirl_Princess* |
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Vball Chickie1624 Member
since 2000-05-14
Posts 116New York |
This is a very good poem. I hope that everyone has at least one friend like that. I'm glad I have one. Keep writing and have fun! Luv ya, Danielle "Dream what you want to dream; go where you want to go; be what you want to be, because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you want to do." "The role of a writer is not to say what we can all say, but what we are unable to say." - Anais Nin "Follow your own heart, not others." |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a wonderful poem. Friendship is a wonderful thing that should be cherished. PS- But you shouldn't drink, ok?!? "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
ok i understand just about every teen has drank sometime in there life. but not many go through this and if your friend was there for you, you should never let her go cause she is a true friend and there the best kind to have. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
this is one type of person that you dont ever want to lose...your poem is amazing...we all make mistakes and your friend was there when you tumbled down...she helped pull you up...thats one friend that you should cherish... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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