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CLBinLOVE
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since 2000-06-04
Posts 147
Hilton Head, SC, USA

0 posted 2000-06-25 09:53 PM


if i die

if i die
i want you to know
that i didnt want to go
i really wanted to go home

i didnt want to leave you
without sayin goodbye
i wanted to see you again
to look you eye to eye

i wanted to say thanks
for all you've done for me
thanks for the love and patience
and for all those things that i didnt see

if i die
i dont want you to cry
i want you live a great life
and tell me what i missed when you die

please remeber me
but please dont dwell
please remeber the good times
and when the bad come, say oh well

please remeber that it wasnt your fault
please remeber i dont blame you
for as much as i loved my life
ill probably like heaven too

please dont cry
all is good and well
i know you miss me
and i miss you as well

if i can chose my heaven
all my memories will be there
especially the ones of you
because without you life would be bare

but remeber most of all that i didnt die without a fight
because i didnt want to leave you
and i never will
i will always stay with you
always

i wrote this poem cuz i was sittin in the car on a road trip and started thinkin about what would happen if i got in a wreck and died, of if u jus died in general, so i wrote this to my girlfriend AND my mom
thx for reading guys and say all u want about the poem, i enjoy the harsh words
hehe
CLB



always follow your heart, never follow others unless it is truely where you want to go, and never give up a dream, maybe just set it aside for a while... :)

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Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
1 posted 2000-06-26 12:53 PM


great work. i regret to inform you i have not read alot of your work but i will from now on and keep your head up don't ponder on bad things cause thats when they happen.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


LoveBug
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2 posted 2000-06-26 12:57 PM


This is a beautiful poem! But don't dwell on the bad things that can happen to you. You have your whole life to live!  

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea

Jeremy Halstead
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since 2000-06-01
Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A
3 posted 2000-06-26 01:05 AM


Death is one of those things that are, well....permanent.  It's always good to know what it is you'd like to say...especially this nicely.  nice job.

Jeremy D. Halstead

"Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade."

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
4 posted 2000-06-26 01:12 AM


this is such a beautiful poem...i dont know why you would think something like that though...just remember if you did die there are people out there that love you...so you shouldnt think the worst...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2007-11-18 02:01 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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