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jennie may*
Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 122


0 posted 2000-06-25 09:45 PM


lalalala

I sing and sing and
sing
to

stop the sting

words I wish you could
feel
leaving my lips

breath from my lungs
like
thorny tips

of roses you gave me

all dried up in my closet



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anonymousfemale
Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797
Limbo
1 posted 2000-06-25 09:48 PM


Jennie:This is a different poem...but it is well written.  

Hope this person didn't bring too much pain.

~AF~

"Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement."
Christopher Fry


Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
2 posted 2000-06-26 12:40 PM


well i voted for it and loved it as well and i wish you joy throughout your life. and i can't wait to read more of you.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2007-11-18 02:01 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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