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JoLake137
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since 2000-06-25
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0 posted 2000-06-25 03:01 PM


*The Gift I Gave to You*

This gift is more precious than gold,
it is who I am and what I want to be.
I can never get it back,
and to only one I can give it to.
I always wanted to keep it till I was married,
but it's gone now.
I like you so much,
never would I have imagined something would happen between us.
We started talking about things I thought were private.
One thing led to another,
and my feelings took over.
I gave into you that night,
you did nothing to force me.
It was my decision.
The pain I endured was worth every minute,
but still i have my regrets.
I'm afraid you only see me as a friend with benefits,
although you tell me we're more.
I'm not sure if I'll ever know.
I want you to be my Romeo and I your Juliet,
to me you are the world.
I pray you will never forget me,
because I know you will hole a special place in my heart.
Never will I forget the time we spent together,
and the feelings we shared.

    *Jo Lake*



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**AANGELLE**
Junior Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 45

1 posted 2000-06-25 03:05 PM


Dear Jo,
        I think this is a beautiful poem and clearly expresses the way loads of girls feel  Well done keep up the good work!!!

Cerenity
Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
2 posted 2000-06-25 03:10 PM


Hi JoLake,

Hi, welcome to passions, this is a wonderful first post, so much enjoyed and look forward to more of your poems.

Cerenity

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
3 posted 2000-06-26 12:20 PM


welcome to passions. i like your work and hope to read more of it soon and till then keep writing.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2007-11-18 02:00 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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