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~Night_Mist~ Junior Member
since 2000-06-24
Posts 31Calgary, AB Canada |
Scarred There is a hollow, In my heart, Where happiness used to be. My once beautiful and radiant face, Is now tear-streaked and sad. The joy and peace, That I used to feel, Have been stolen. The will, I used to have, Has long disppeared. The shy smile, That used to spread across my face, Refuses to show itself again. The warmth, That long ago used to fill my life, Has been replaced by depression. This terrible disease has plagued my mind and body. It has left behind it's never healing scar on my wounded soul. |
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**Angel** Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 162 |
Wow, this is really powerful. Keep posting. |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
~N_M~ I'm so very sorry to hear of the pain you are undergoing at this point! I wish you the best of luck! Your poetry is beautiful!!This poem makes me feel and see the pain you are feeling~Keep writing! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ p.s. If you ever need anything, I'm a very good listener and give really good advice and insight. Please don't ever hesitate to e-mail me at StarPryncess17@hotmail.com. I'd be glad to do all that I can!!  ~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~ ~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~ |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
great work as always and i hate to feel your pain that your going through so if i can help just let me know ok and good luck. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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~Night_Mist~ Junior Member
since 2000-06-24
Posts 31Calgary, AB Canada |
Hey People: Thanks for writing! Luv, ~Night_Mist~ |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
well what can i say??? this is a BEAUTIFUL poem...i really liked it alot...get on with your life...dont let your past drag you down...remeber your past is nothing but a bunch of memories...its the future you should be worring about... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
The poem was wonderfuly done...I'm going to start reading more of yours now. All I can tell you is that you really need to look at my signature at the bottom...you'll be okay again...I promise. Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is heart-wrenching Night_Mist ... your emotions come through clearly in this wonderfully written verse. I do hope the pain will dissipate with time. Writing has always been my therapy for the soul ... keep it up! Great work! Best wishes, /Kit |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Hon, I'm so sorry that you have to go through this. Just be as strong as you can, things will get better. I hope writing this helped the pain. If you ever need to talk, e-mail me. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Moving and a message beyond words. You write with the eloquency that seldom is completely appreciated. Love your style and rythm. Don't leave us waiting too long for more. TAP2 |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I'm so sorry that this is how you feel. Be strong for this will show your true character. We all hurt in life but it's getting thru it that makes us stronger. You scars will vanish in time. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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