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April Resi
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since 1999-10-18
Posts 119
Alabama

0 posted 2000-06-25 12:35 PM


how can i smile and be "me"
when all i am is gone
so far away i cannot touch
no where to be seen

i hear his voice on the phone
talk each and every night
trying to hold together
and not let hurt be known

i feel so trapped and helpless
when he visits my memories
but no ammount of crying
or screaming can help this

hours seem like days
and days feel like years
i long to feel his touch (again)
his tender kiss is what i crave

the only thoughts in my mind
are dreams of weeks to come
when we'll be in an embrace
and the whole wide world will find

that love will always wait
forever if it must
it will survive time, joy and pain
if it is written in fate.

© Copyright 2000 April - All Rights Reserved
Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
1 posted 2000-06-25 01:43 AM


i believe in what you say here. because my true love was killed about three years ago. and by life has never been the same i can't get to close to people. but i know when i die i'll be happy forever with her. also great work.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2000-06-25 05:33 AM


Beautiful and sad.....take care.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
3 posted 2000-06-26 02:22 AM


i feel you...my first love played me for a fool thinking that i just wanted to sleep with him...ha was he wrong...after that never seen him until recently...and its so hard to look at him and think that this is someone that i loved at one point...but i have no feelings or emotions left for him...love isnt a game...but he thought it was...if you want something very badly set it free, if it comes back to you its yours forever if it doesnt it was never yours to begin with...so i hope that you will get back with him...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

April Resi
Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 119
Alabama
4 posted 2000-06-26 11:22 PM


First of all, thank you for the replies!
I am happy that people have taken this in different ways... especially you, Erin. I'm glad it meant different things to different people.
Thank you again for the replies!

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2007-11-18 03:31 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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