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MysticalAngel
Junior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 23


0 posted 2000-06-23 02:55 PM


You are a dream
Come true to me
A gift picked by God
Out of a great big sea

You are the light
Sent to brighten my day
To make my life better
In every single way

You are the moon
Put to hang about the stars
To light my path
If I wonder too far

You are my angel
My heaven sent gift
Here to watch over me
As the years passed

You are my life
My world, my soul
Without you my love
My life would be cold

You are what makes me happy
When my days are sad and blue
You brighten up every second
That I spend each day with you

Without you my world would crumble
Pointless, my life would be
Saddness would fill my days
Because you were no longer here with me

But our love grows stronger
Each and every day
And I know we love each other
In each and every way

Another poem about Andrew... Tell me what you think! Thanks

© Copyright 2000 Carissa Clark - All Rights Reserved
Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
1 posted 2000-06-23 03:03 PM


ok ok i just got done reading to other one and i see you really care for him but doe's he know? if not i think you should show him these. best of luck and hope to you. great poem if i might add i voted.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


MysticalAngel
Junior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 23

2 posted 2000-06-23 03:11 PM


Thank you very much! He does know how much I love him and until I am 18.. only a year.. we can't be together. My parents don't like him and plus he lives about 5 hours from me. And one other thing stopping us... he's in jail. I don't know for how long. I only hear things from his family. But hopefully things work out the way I want! Thank you Jeremiah! Your opinions mean alot to me! Your a sweety! MysticalAngel

** If something is too good to be true... 9 times out of 10 it is **

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733

3 posted 2000-06-23 03:21 PM


Wow, you're really good at expressing your feelings for him.  That poem was really good.  keep it up, and good luck to you both
Bel

Lani_DarkOne
Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 152
UK
4 posted 2000-06-24 09:38 AM


Ahhhh!This is so sweet and full of feeling. Show it to him (if you haven't already).
I love the imagery...keep it up!!



"Controlling my feelings for too long....
And forcing our darkest souls to unfold...
And pushing us into self-destruction...."
*~Muse*~

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2007-11-18 01:56 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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