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**AANGELLE**
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since 2000-06-21
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0 posted 2000-06-22 03:58 PM


It's usually a love poem you want to hear,
So I'll tell you of a love I've had for a year.
This is pure love yet many will mock it.
This is a poem of my love for CHOCOLATE.


Creamy CHOCOLATE cravings
Heavenly safe-haven,
Or just my best friend?
CHOCOLATE never ends
On biscuit or on men
Lick it off however you can-
And find forever love.
True love is of the CHOCOLATE kind
Eternally loyal I'm sure you'll find.

(P.S.look at the first letters of each line in the second stanza!!!)


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**AANGELLE**
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1 posted 2000-06-22 04:09 PM


Oh!! I've just read over this poem and it really is a load of crap!!!  I don't really expect any of you to reply nicely so sorry again about wasting space..oooops!!
Crystalina123
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since 2000-01-31
Posts 228

2 posted 2000-06-22 04:22 PM


I thought it was cute! Chocolate is also my favorite food!

Crystal

Maybe God has us meet a few wrong people so that when we meet the right one we can truly appreciate the gift.

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
3 posted 2000-06-22 05:42 PM


that poem was soo cute.. i dont think that i have ever read a poem about someone loving chocolate soo much. i liked it though how you spelled chocolate with the first letter of each word...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
4 posted 2000-06-23 02:06 AM


Different really different. kind of like it though. its funny to in a second thought kind of way LOL.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


**AANGELLE**
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since 2000-06-21
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5 posted 2000-06-23 05:19 PM


Thanks for the replies. Don't look into the "meaning" too much or anything because basically - there is none...Once again I have to thank chocolate for making this poem possible....
**AANGELLE**
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6 posted 2000-06-25 02:56 PM


OOOps
**AANGELLE**
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7 posted 2001-04-18 01:54 PM


Still lovin Chocolate
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8 posted 2001-04-18 04:33 PM


*runs around screaming*

CHOCOLATE!!!!!

There is pleasure in poetic pains which only poets know......~Unknown

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